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Comments on Skin Deep

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From: Sarah
Date: 01/23/2010
"iambic beatnik groove."

Where did you find words so perfect that every time I reread them, I gasp?

From: Sarah
Date: 01/21/2010
Oh. My. God.

i don't know where to start...

This was so wonderful, so amazing. I've just got into the fandom thanks to your pimping post - thanks for that, btw - and this was the one thing I wanted to read. That was the first thing I thought, 'is everyone that colour-blind'? and you 've taken that sentence and made it into something completely believable, rooted in context, earthed and real and true. The section divisions are perfect, the writing amazing... I will do it justice, but could NOT read without letting you know how amazing I think it was. And Scotty's comment about needing a shower - incredibly perfect - all the cadence of their conversation, which is murder to capture - just - brava.

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